Haiku, poems, and stories

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-Robert
Showing posts with label echo. Show all posts
Showing posts with label echo. Show all posts

Saturday, May 4, 2013

spilling over the wall
Jupiter's beard ...
ivory, mauve & magenta


Here is a revision suggested by the prompt echo, which was posted for Facebook's NaHaiWriMo page for 5/05/2013.  It is a bit long, but I like the repetition suggested by the word echo and the flowing quality suggested by cascadesIn fact, those qualities attracted me to the scene.


cascades of Jupiter's beard
echo down the wall ~
ivory, mauve & magenta