Haiku, poems, and stories

Random thoughts and stories, maybe even the occasional photo.

-Robert

Thursday, August 16, 2012

peck, rest
   peck, rest
the whole long day
the shell falls away
ah, freedom


beak open wide
squawking ...
the struggle begins

Posted on NaHaiWriMo's FB page, 8/16/2012.  Prompt was birth.  I wanted the first one to emphasize the hard work involved in birth.  In the case of a bird, it must break out of the shell by its own labour.

I also considered posting the following, but did not.  Maybe some other day:  "baby's first cry / his struggle begins"

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